Any good writers out there?

[Oberst Hajj]

Do we have any members that are good a creative and descriptive writing? I need someone that can help write some short descriptions for our gaming events at Origins this year. Ares is wanting to run an article about them on their site, and I'd like for them to sound as good as possible.

Thanks!

[Beer&pretzels]

Herr Oberst,
How do you like this description?


Action over Amien, or the Last Flight of the Red Baron. On March 21, 1918 Gen. Ludendorf launched the first of the offensives that have been called the "Kaiserschalft" offensives. These offensives were meant to disrupt and demoralize the Allied armies before the American army could get established and up to combat capability. Ludendorfs first offensive, Operation Michael, was launched against lines held by the British Fifth Army. The German Army drove the Britsih lines nearly 10 miles backwards during the first 3 days of the offensive and eventually drove 20 miles into Allied territory. However, by early April, British resistance stiffened partially due to Gen. Haig committing veteran Australian and Canadian units to the front. Ludendorf called off the offensive on April 5. A big problem still existed for the German army. Supply lines were long and over ground that had been torn up during 4 years of battle. German front line troops occupied hastily constructed shallow trenches while British troops occupied more secure positions. This situation did not go unnoticed by the RAF and the other Allied air services. German ground units were under daily strafing and bombing attacks and were taking tremendous casualties. Ludendorf ordered the Luftstreitekraft to stand firmly against the RAF and repel the air attacks. Unfortunately, the German air service no longer held the numerical superiority in this sector that it enjoyed in March. That was the strategic situation that Manfred von Richtofen flew into on April 21, 1918.

[Oberst Hajj]

That sounds pretty good. It's a little long for what we need. Below is the details of one of the events, see what you can do with it...



Daring Rescue
Slot: Thurs 2000-2200
Complexity: Easy
Age: 8+
Experience: None
Every player gets a free miniature!
Player limit: 10

A top level French spy has managed to send word that he has vital Intel that can only be delivered in person. High Command has deemed it worth pulling him out of enemy territory. Will the Allies be able to rescue their spy, or will the dastardly Huns strike another well placed blow?

[Lt. S.Kafloc]

Daring mission for foolhardy and inexperienced flyers. You have 2 hours from takeoff to rescue a top level French spy who has vital intelligence that can only be delivered in person. Are you aged 8 or over? Can you complete this easy rescue? Can you foil the dastardly Hun? Your country needs you. First 10 volunteers only, survival not a prerequisite and a free miniature even if you don't complete the mission. What more can we say.

[Nightbomber]

A very good idea. The text should be like a briefing before a sortie, short but descriptive, showing primary and secondary objectives, as well as victory conditions for both sides. Listeners should be hooked and engaged, ready to jump into action at once. A bit of authentic history and educational aspect would be welcome as well, without making the audience bored :)

[crashx]

ATTENTION ALL PILOTS: Volunteers are needed for a mission behind enemy lines. You are to rendezvous and extract a leading French spy with vital information for the Allies. This is a high priority mission, and the Germans want this spy STOPPED!!! Are you brave and bold enough to return with him!!?? Meet with the mission commander for your "WINGS OF GLORY"!!!

[Naharaht]

That sounds good, Timothy.

[fast.git]

Timing is everything. Word had filtered down to the flightline that this operation was far from the usual contact patrol. A mixed bag of Allied aircraft – both scouts and two-seaters – have penetrated deep behind German lines, intent upon retrieving a top-level agent and the vital intelligence he carries. If all went as planned, you would have returned to the safety of your lines long before the Germans knew that you were there. But what, in war, ever goes according to plan? As your eyes pick out the steadily growing black shapes that can only be German scouts, you realize that the fate of the impending offensive, and the lives of thousands of your countrymen, hangs in the balance. Failure is not an option.

[Oberst Hajj]

These are all really good guys! I'm just going to put the whole list of events we have planned in this thread and you guys can go to town on whichever ones you want to do!


Zeppelin Spotted
Slot: Sat 1000-1300
Complexity: Medium
Age: 10+
Experience: Some recommended, but not required.
Every player gets a free miniature!
Player limit: 10

Just off the cost of Belgium a returning German Zeppelin has been spotted at low altitude. All available aircraft have been dispatched to intercept it. Knowing its great value, the Kaiser has sent Jasta 5 to escort it back to the Fatherland. Will the Allies be able shoot it down in flames, or will the huge gas bag climb to safety while it’s Scout protection makes short work of the enemy planes?



A picture is worth 1,000 men (Could use a better name for this one)
Slot: Thurs 0900-1100
Complexity: Medium
Age: 10+
Experience: Some recommended, but not required.
Every player gets a free miniature!
Player limit: 10

Throughout WWI, one of the vital roles that aircraft played was photo reconnaissance. Clear photos of the enemy's side of the lines could save thousands of lives on the ground during the assault. In this mission both sides are trying to photograph the area in advance of a large land engagement as well as deny the enemy access to the same information. Players can choose to fly the recon plane or one of the scout aircraft assigned to protect it and engage any other enemy aircraft.



Wings of Glory Aerodrome Invitational 2013
Slot: Sat 1800-2200
Complexity: Advanced
Age: 12+
Experience: Required
Prizes
Player limit: 24

Test your mental against some of the best pilots from the Wings of Glory Aerodrome in this large furball of a tournament! Players will start with an early war plane and progress to newer and newer planes as they get shot down. Points awarded for shooting an enemy down, being shot down, setting a plane on fire, and fleeing the battle.



Wake island attack.
Player limit 12.
Complexity: Medium.

Players will be defending the island with wildcats and P-40s as BGIF members will be attacking with Vals and Zeros to try and take out the airstrip and other vital targets. Prizes will go to the defenders. Second game will be Guadalcanal. Player limit 12. Complexity: Medium. Defenders will be using Japanese planes to defend the island as BGIF members will be attacking with Mitchells and wildcats and P-40s trying to destroy the airstrip and other targets as well. Prizes will go out to the defenders.


Battle of Britain.
Player limit 12.
Complexity: Medium.

Players will be defending the white cliffs of Dover from air attacks from German Bombers and fighters flown by BGIF members. Defenders will be getting prizes.


Wake island vs carrier.
Player limit 20.
Complexity: Medium.

Both sides will be getting prizes and both sides will be able to choose if they want to fly a bomber or fighter.


Wings of Glory WW1: BUG HUNT 1919
Slot:
Complexity: Advanced
Age: 12+
Experience: Some recommended, but not required.
Player limit: 14

Spring 1919: the long delayed offensive is now ready, and American Expeditionary Force is poised to strike. General Pershing wants to keep the Germans from shifting reinforcements to the attack sector by crippling a major railroad marshaling yard and station center. Rather than risking his bombers attacking this heavily defended target, Pershing brings out the latest American innovation: the Kettering Bug. The German pilots must try to shoot down as many of these pilotless bombs as they can. Oh, and watch out for escorting SPADs!



Wings of Glory WW1: CONTACT PATROL!
Slot:
Complexity: Advanced
Age: 12+
Experience: Some recommended, but not required.
Player limit: 14


The Offensive has kicked off this morning, and your troops have broken through the front lines. But now, HQ needs to figure out where the leading units are, and without portable radios, this job falls on the contact patrol planes of your squadron. Top cover is being provided because, (did we forget to mention) the other side is doing the same thing.



Wings of Glory WWI Aerodrome vs. Aerodrome
Slot: Thursday 1300 -1600
Complexity: Easy
Age: 8+
Experience: None
Prizes Awarded
Player limit: 14

Wings of Glory WWI. One crater-marked front. Two Opposing Aerodromes. Take to the skies and contend for your airspace as you attempt to destroy your enemy's 'Drome and defend your own. Prizes Awarded!


Wings of Glory WWI Burn Drachen Burn!
Slot: Thursday 1700 - 2000
Complexity: Easy
Age: 8+
Experience: None
Prizes Awarded
Player limit: 14

Wings of Glory WWI Balloon Busting / Defense Mission. Entente vs. Central Powers. Can you take out the Balloons before the enemy takes you out?? Victory Point System will determine an all out Best Pilot. Prizes Awarded!


Wings of Glory WWI Staaken
Slot: Friday 0900-1200
Complexity: Easy
Age: 10+
Experience: None
Prizes Awarded
Player limit: 14

Wings of Glory WWI. Late in the night a group of German scouts has taken out part of the defenses around a vital Entente munitions factory and HQ. Now comes word that a Zeppelin Staaken and at least two Gotha bombers are headed on course for a strike. Can the Entente Scouts and remining defenses hold them off or will the Central Powers prevail in taking out its target? New Players are welcomed. Prizes awarded!!



Wings of Glory Post WWI: Wild, Wild East! [Thanks for the title concept, Zoe]
Slot: to be decided.
Complexity: MODERATE
Age: 8+
Experience: SOME
Prizes ?
Player limit: 8 [repaints are the possible limit]
Wings of Glory Post WWI scenario 1920 (Polish-Soviet War). In memory of Merian Cooper and other American volunteer pilots of Kościuszko Squadron. Ground attack mission involving 1-2 two seaters plus escorts against incoming Red scouts.

[Nick_ace]

Like it, but I don't know, maybe...
It's a great ideai Herr Oberst!!!!!

Nick

[Jager]

Wings of Glory WW1: BUG HUNT 1919
Slot:
Complexity: Advanced
Age: 12+
Experience: Some recommended, but not required.
Player limit: 14

Spring 1919: the long delayed offensive is now ready, and American Expeditionary Force is poised to strike. General Pershing wants to keep the Germans from shifting reinforcements to the attack sector by crippling a major railroad marshaling yard and station center. Rather than risking his bombers attacking this heavily defended target, Pershing brings out the latest American innovation: the Kettering Bug. The German pilots must try to shoot down as many of these pilotless bombs as they can. Oh, and watch out for escorting SPADs!

JASTA Pilots! The Americans will be assaulting the Fatherland any day, and have brought their latest infernal device to aid in the attack: pilotless flying bombs! They intend to launch these devices at our main rail yards to keep supplies and re-enforcements from coming to blunt their attacks. You must catch and destroy these “Bugs” before they reach their targets. Be warned; the American Scout pilots will be trying to prevent you from succeeding. The Kaiser and the Fatherland are depending on your bravery and skill to prevail!

Karl

[Jager]

Herr Oberst:
The game "Contact Patrol:" is not on the schedule. Do you still need an enhanced descriptive for it?
Karl

[Oberst Hajj]

I just had it there as back up Karl.